Our school writing focus for 2015 is to enhance our students vocabulary by writing better descriptions in all genre.
Check out our blogs later this week, to see what we wrote using a range of these fabulous photos on http://www.viralnova.com/hilarious-hybrid-animals/ Check out our blogs for our descriptive writing about the pictures below created on PicLit. www.piclit.com
The rubbish smells like a man who hasn't washed for five years.
The owl is as spooky as a dark night. By Nevaeh The dinosaur is as friendly as a person. The boy is as stink as a toilet. By Shadae The cat cried like it was dying. The bell is as loud as a pig. By Kevin The girl is as sweet as a lollipop. The teacher growls like a hurt lion. By Bossdyn The teacher growls like Mrs Mclaren. The cat cried like an adult. By Awhio The boy is like ice. The birds sung like famous people. By Shayna The sheep is as cute as me. Godzilla is ugly like Whare and me. By Blake The horse is like a tall person. The water is as hot like lava. By Phoenix The boy stomped like a dinosaur. Her hair was as long as a river. By Jana The bed was like a trampoline. The library was as quiet as a mouse. By Zoe The cow is as heavy as a truck. The grass was as green as a tree. By Mauata The dog is as smelly as a sock. The bed is as hard as a rock. By Wairiki The Girl is as sweet as a rose. The bell is as loud as thunder. By Tauaiti The flower is as beautiful as a butterfly. The leaf is as soft as silk. By Bailey |
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